animation sketch

I thought i'd finally work on the opening of my (planned) animated series, Where the Sky meets the Tide.

I'm trying out the whole sketching first thing, and i'm gonna sketch the whole beginning before drawing any of it proper ^^

I would really appreciate some critique on this, so that when i get to lining and colouring, i know how to make it much better!! (i do know about the random dots and lines, these will be removed in the actual thing ^^)

Enjoy
Wolfie